Sometimes a sentence that is not technically incorrect but could still be improved by making coordinate elements more precisely parallel. Sentences may not be wrong, but sound clumsy, and can be made tighter and more effective.
In literature, the term
‘parallelism’ is used to refer to the practice placing together
similarly structure related phrases, words or clauses. Parallelism
involves placing sentence items in a parallel grammatical format wherein
nouns are listed together, specific verb forms are listed together and
the like. When one fails to follow this parallel structure, it results
in faulty parallelism. The failure to maintain a balance in grammatical
forms is known as faulty parallelism wherein similar grammatical forms
receive dissimilar or unequal weight.
FAULTY:
He liked to play basketball and riding horses.
CORRECT:
He liked playing basketball and riding horses.
He liked to play basketball and to ride horses.
He liked to play basketball and ride horses.
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